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Post by Deleted on May 28, 2017 1:20:17 GMT
Ey. I quickly doodled out a Cleyran character. I'll include a brief bio as well (as to not take up too much space or spoil personality details). As a note, I usually like creating beginner/underpowered characters. It makes the world feel more formidable and it's fun working with social/combat niches. I hope she doesn't come off as too obnoxious. Name: Aislin MacKenna Race: Nezumi Class: Blue Mage Abilities: - White Wind (learned after a scrap with a Zuu in Cleyra's Trunk). - Maiden Training -Despite the Cleyran's peaceful nature, Aislin utilizes some of her dancing techniques for self-defense, specifically striking and kicks. However, her Maiden Training is far from an optimal combat style and not to be mistaken as a martial art. Age: 19 Height: 6' 1" Weight: 138 lbs. Physical Appearance: Aislin's fur is french vanilla (if not eggshell white) with a darker, reddish brown tint to her hair. As a former shrine maiden, she developed a lean build due to her dedication to the various ceremonial dances to empower her people and homeland. In particular, she developed thicker legs in support of the frequent hopping motions used in these dances. She is also known for her unruly fur, which tufts at numerous places including a spot underneath her chin. Other maidens occasionally mock this as a 'budding beard'. Attachments:
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Post by TheSeeker on May 28, 2017 23:14:27 GMT
Seems cool to me! Haven't heard of many Cleyrans, and it's cool to see a Blue Mage who has a mask, akin to the original Blue Mages first debuting in FF5. She looks cute, and her unarmed fighting as self-defense works as well as dancing knives/swords, etc. :3
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Post by M&M&M on May 29, 2017 0:21:48 GMT
Sexy! The design reminds me of some retro games I used to play, like Sly Cooper or Crash Bandicoot. So she basically combines dancing and unarmed combat together? That's awesome!
I would love to hear what her personality is like and the reason why she chose to become a fighter.
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Post by Deleted on May 29, 2017 1:54:05 GMT
Seeker: Thanks for noticing. I tried using refences from the early Blue Mage. I think Loremasters might count as Blue Magey enough. I read briefly they were in games even before FF5.
M&M&M: Heheh. Thanks. I like dem curvy cartoons. I can send you her charsheet if you're interested in her backstory (don't worry, it isn't that long).
As for her motivations on fighting, I think I owe an explanation: 1. She raised herself on novels and tales, many of which glorify combat or at least express it as a force of willpower. 2. Having spent minimal time in the safer areas Cleyra's Trunk, she has at least had encounters with Zuu. Even with her mask and ability to learn skills through 'empathy,' she is not a Beast Master and must accept that many monsters will be violent towards her. 3. Depending on whether Cleyra is destroyed in the hypothetical scenerio, Aislin will decide that pure pacifism is not sustainable for oneself or defending loved ones. She will accept combat as a necessity in dire circumstances.
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Post by Deleted on Jun 4, 2017 20:13:49 GMT
Here are some more doofy fan characters. One is a samurat named Mara. The other is a not-so-clever joke. I'm currently recovering from monstrous nausea, so I'll add some char detail on Mara later.
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Post by greysky on Jun 4, 2017 21:53:03 GMT
The first one needs more zippers to be a proper nomura character.
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Post by Deleted on Jun 10, 2017 22:38:41 GMT
greysky: You're absolutely right. I'll do another attempt sometime soon. I'm probably gonna use this thread to dump my general Nezumi fanart. Everyone else can feel free to do the same. (Update: retouched the pic to make it slightly less terrible.)
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Post by M&M&M on Jun 12, 2017 0:46:59 GMT
Awesome! As i said before, I really do like the art style. So free.
And the buttplug spear compliments her...don't ask why.
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Post by Deleted on Jun 12, 2017 0:50:28 GMT
Kain's Lance was cool! >:I
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Post by Deleted on Jun 17, 2017 9:41:44 GMT
Here's a doodle. It's gonna be the cover for In the Meantime. I hope it's okay that I keeping using this thread to dump the occasional Nezumi fanart.
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Post by M&M&M on Jun 17, 2017 22:34:28 GMT
From the thumbnail, I thought I saw a tired and battered Frato just on the verge of collapse. But then I clicked on it as saw what i wanted to see..
DETERMINATION!!!
Brill work, Humble =P
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Post by Deleted on Jun 18, 2017 4:55:55 GMT
Thank you. I appreciate it. Also, poor Frato.
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Post by M&M&M on Jun 18, 2017 19:28:33 GMT
Damn it, I meant 'Freya', DON'T MAKE FUN OF MEH! *Runs off crying*
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Post by Deleted on Jun 18, 2017 20:23:43 GMT
Freudian slip? >
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Post by Robshi on Jun 18, 2017 23:42:32 GMT
Naw, he's just thinking of ways to make Frato suffer, like he usually does. Some interesting doodles and character designs here. Nice work!
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Post by TheSeeker on Jun 19, 2017 2:28:19 GMT
Good stuff as always! Love how both pictures turned out. Was wondering how Freya'd look in your style. :3
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Post by Deleted on Jun 19, 2017 15:54:35 GMT
Thanks to both of you!
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Post by DentonClone on Jul 11, 2017 7:24:54 GMT
What a fantastic style! I love how fluid and animated the characters look. It really brings out the character's personalities.
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Post by Deleted on Jul 25, 2017 21:33:16 GMT
Did r63 (genderswap) versions of Freya and Fratley. Meet Frederick and Franslin. Attachments:
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Post by Deleted on Jul 31, 2017 20:54:34 GMT
Denton Clone: Thanks a lot! I try. I apologize for the late reply. I churned out another new character, Shannon Baclan: a pauper, widow, and empty-nest mother who occasionally indulges in alcohol and underground-fighting. I didn't exactly have a plan for her 'job'. She isn't combat trained at all. She fights with family gauntlets she can barely lift. She was raised as a sod farmer on the outer rung of Burmecia (populated by laborers and farmers) and her husband went missing during the Alexandrian Siege on Burmecia. I wrote a full sheet on her if anyone is interested. (EDIT: Added link to charsheet) pastebin.com/vk19RVuE
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